
A while ago we got invited to a pool party. I got a warning from the lifeguard but I didn't mind. I ate pizza. It was cheese.
I didn't feel like pepperoni and we went back out in the water. That's when I started to dive
into the water. Luke and me went in the whirl pool. It was very fast! It
whirled me around and around until I was dizzy. It was dizzy. It was

crazy. It was hard to get out of the whirlpool. In the whirl pool people were in it. And they were calling us back in for dessert. We went back out into the water. That's when I started to go down
the water slide.

It was crazy fast. I had to walk two flights of stairs. There was a metal bar when
you go down
the water slide. There's two things that squirted water down the bolting water slide. There is a railing when you go up the stairs.

You're probably wondering what my dad was
thinking. Do you know? He was
thinking, "Where is the little slides?" When I told him I was going down the water slide, he saw me going up the stairs to the water slide.
Wonderful writing Trent! I would be just like your dad wondering where the little slides were! That would make me nervous! You are very brave! :-)
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